Alright then. Well. Seeing as how I've got a bit of time to spare before I sleep for the night, let's get some of these critiques out of the way real quick, aight?

[@SadCubone]: 
-Personality is lackluster; I expected something more along the lines of a paragraph or two, rather than a vague list of catch-all phrases. Sorry.
-Skills... Okay, As before, more elaboration would be nice.
-History and Other... Well, other than the grammatical errors left and right (which, honestly, stick out like a sore thumb to me), they seem... Well, okay. 's about it.

[@WeepingLiberty]:
-Well, at first glance, everything seems to be okay. I'll get a deeper look at it when I'm... You know, a bit less tired, but as my half-asleep self looks at it it's fine for now.

[@HylianRose]:
-Well, yeah... It's kind of difficult to actualize the images to a person of any sort, so I'd like to request a bit more of a detailed description of her new appearance text-wise. Old one's fine as-is, I guess.
-Okay, SO. The characters in this RP are not "reborn", as your sheet leads me to believe you think they are- at least, not in the conventional sense. They are taken directly from Earth, as they are at that one exact moment (who KNOWS what that is!), so... Yeah. Sorry, those bits gonna have to go.
Other than that... Well, sleep first.

[@Crow]:
-Well, height was nice, but... Bust size was probably unnecessary. Actually, strike that. Completely unnecessary. Sorry if I'm being a bit rough here.
-I'd like an elaboration on the 'Ling' as a whole, if you would. Please. General appearance, lifespan, common characteristics, habitat, etc;.
-Personality, Skills, and History are all a tad... Well, lackluster, for lack of a better term. Could I ask you to flesh them out a bit, please?
-"...hurt as punch as a punch..." Can you... Rephrase this, please? I suspect this to be a common typing error, so no big deal. Would just like some clarification, please.

Aaand that's about all I have left in me for tonight before I get KOed by the ol' Sandman. I'll have a more in-depth look at these tomorrow (aka in approximately 8-10 hrs), so I guess... Take your time to edit?

Last second edit: And yes, hiders please.