[quote=@PKMNB0Y]
-Well, height was nice, but... Bust size was probably unnecessary. Actually, strike that. Completely unnecessary. Sorry if I'm being a bit rough here.
-I'd like an elaboration on the 'Ling' as a whole, if you would. Please. General appearance, lifespan, common characteristics, habitat, etc;.
-Personality, Skills, and History are all a tad... Well, lackluster, for lack of a better term. Could I ask you to flesh them out a bit, please?
-"...hurt as punch as a punch..." Can you... Rephrase this, please? I suspect this to be a common typing error, so no big deal. Would just like some clarification, please.

Aaand that's about all I have left in me for tonight before I get KOed by the ol' Sandman. I'll have a more in-depth look at these tomorrow (aka in approximately 8-10 hrs), so I guess... Take your time to edit?

Last second edit: And yes, hiders please.
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Alright, now I just have to add the Hiders and expand on history and personality.

Yeah, I was adding Ling characteristics while you typed.
Ling are basically egg-bound beasts. Their egg shells comes in a variety of colours. They will mature both literally and metaphorically during their journey.
Sakura moves by hopping.