[@Natty] Iceman looks good.  A few typos and some tense shifting (from past to present), but otherwise looks good.  I am planning on having Mystique's Brotherhood be a villain group that opposes Ms. Marvel sometime "soon" (since they have "history" in the comics).  While I'll allow Pyro to be on Magneto's Brotherhood, I would like to retain Mystique's roster as much as possible (Blob, Avalanche, etc).  Also, you could put down as the reason why Angelica (Firestar) convinced Bobby to "come out" that he is a mutant is because her father reacted positively towards hers.

Also, I am toying with the idea of making Hawkeye a GM NPC (the stories I want to tell with him need to wait a little) and make an application for Cyclops.  :hmm