[@Raijinslayer] Interesting character, he seems pretty good to me, but a few things: 1). You [i]DO[/i] know that Crystals are brittle? You can shatter a diamond by stepping on it. I just don't see the whole "nigh invulnerable" part. I mean, it can easily stop a knife, but a few bullets would crack even the hardest crystals. 2). I'm not super sure about the crystaling people part. Even if it takes awhile, it might not end well. 3). One of his nicknames should be "Crazy Diamond". Other than that, I think he's pretty cool. I do like his power. [@Morden Man] First, you didn't indent your sheet properly (The punishment for this heinous crime is being strapped to a chair, and being forced to listen to "Stupid Hoe" for all eternity!). Second, for his ethnicity section, you probably could have just said he was Jamaican/Thai/Whatever, and left the rest of the information for his history/other section. Third, I imagine that there'd be some [i]serious[/i] repercussions for the whole incident where he injured another trainee (Like, that'd be something you'd get arrested for...). Finally, the power, I'd like a bit more detail as to what he can do (Since you can do a fuckton with magnetism), and you need to give him [i]real[/i] weaknesses. What you listed aren't going to cut it because they apply to [i]everyone[/i]. [@Angel Eyes] Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwww [@Maxx] I've been wondering how Meifeng and Taylor's powers would interact with each other.