[quote=@PKMNB0Y]
[@Zombehs]: The form's looking pretty alright, but you're on the money about the history; need a liiittle bit more substance to it than just that. Country of origin? Family? More on military (which country would accept him at that age?) and training?  You know, that sorta stuff.[/quote]

Edits have been made, things have been lengthened, etc.