[quote=@SadCubone]
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Well my writing style is more voice based. What I mean by that is, when you read it it's looks as if someone is talking when no one is. Like a narrator or a voice in the head or voices to thoughts. Normally that is weird in stories, books, paragraphs and such but the more I started using it the more people liked it and I haven't dropped it. I feel like it gives whatever you are reading more personality. If you want me to try to change it I can.
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Nah, it's fine, no need to worry. It's just that the weird capitalization of unnecessary things here and there is bugging me, is all.

[@Zombehs]: Looking better. Since more people are applying again, I'll give a buffer of the rest of today before I hand down a verdict.