Big line I'm trying out here--how do you guys feel when you read this line?

[quote]She could find nothing to say to describe the terror--no, the pain--no, the melancholy--no, the sorrow--no, the hope--no. She could not say a word.[/quote]

Or maybe:

[quote]She could find nothing to say to describe the terror--the pain? Sorrow? No, the hope? Melancholy? She could not say a word.[/quote]

Or perhaps:

[quote]She was lost in a haze of so many feelings--pain, sorrow, hope, melancholy--and yet it was all so incomprehensible, so absurd, so [i]wrong,[/i][/quote]