ah i getcha you could have just said that you didnt like my chara so i could improve it. as for the spelling and grammar. i also go through a spelling check. Im just very messy at it and im still working on it. This is also the reason why i went to casual to become better. and because free has nothing interesting to offer. Thats is not excuse but still its one of the reasons. plus im not english but dutch. so that also creates a barrier. and ill edit my post because she or he dont realy know has a piont about me being to overpowerd .