[quote=@Sir Avita]
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Yep, I think I should slow down. xD
So... Slightly below the standard is slightly okay? [s]LIKE IN SCHOOL?[/s]
Also, my excitement is too damn high.

Edit: Added a few more things,
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It's not acceptable to hang just below the standard, but every so often is fine. You need more substance. Put some of your character's thoughts in.

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[quote=@Cuccoruler]
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Awww it's so much fun posting fast!!! Oh well, I think it's about time that someone intervenes before Cia starts to completely mess with his head.
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Sssslllooowww dddooowwwnnn...plis/