[@LHG100]
This is Casual, not Advanced, so you don't need to worry too much about your writing. I'm not going to be really strict about post quality, and any comments I may make on them is to simply make the whole experience more unified and cohesive. 

And the fix to your post is simple; describe the way Roxy came close to the Komodo, how he came up with the plan to fist the poor Frame, maybe with some alternative ideas for attack first juggled around in his head before coming up with that one, and then describe how you revved up your pilebunker, aimed for that tender robo-ass and threw your punch while leaving the result ambiguous.