Absolutely loved to collabs guys. Very well-written for the most part, and kept me enthralled the entire time. I could see the mental chess pieces moving across the board with each part of each conversation. You guys set up quite a bit of awesomeness with all the alliances and connections. Making Arianna resemble Sam's sister added an interesting twist too. Chapter 1 might bit a bit longer than in the original with all this stuff going on. 

Imma post tonight, [b]AND I'LL BE FREE TO COLLAB WITH LOST ALL DAY TOMORROW (today technically... Wednesday) IF HE IS AVAILABLE[/b]

I'm also going to do a second character here soon, but I'm still working out details for him (mostly history and personality).