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[quote=@Voltus_Ventus]
[@Penultimate_Pi] Mate, don't write because people wrote more, write because you love writing.
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Gotta agree with this. Just think about your character and the simple who,.what, where, when, why and how.

My characters usually only have 2 to three paragraphs, but I found with mine I was explaining two aspects. First, how she became a thief, and secondly how she became a Cyborg as such. I will admit, I had a bit of trouble working out a good reason for the enhancements, but it came through in the end.

[@Vash] Thank you, I'll post it up soon. Was meaning to ask about automatic weaponry as well, but I saw that you mentioned it would be present in a later post.