[@Penultimate_Pi] So, there is one problem with the CS. We already have a navigator, one whom is a close friend and is entwined into the backstory of the Captain Renault. But, I think things could still work. Co-op navigators could definitely be a thing, but we'll play it slow and see how it goes. [@Warrior in the Shadows] Looking good, accepted. No qualms. [@Aoal] [img]https://i.imgur.com/smJvcTv.gif[/img] What do I say about what I've seen thus far...um. Okay. First: This is a cyberpunk pirate RP. I can understand everybody wanting to do swords and such for the sake of pirating but a child with a massive sword is way too far. Second: Your character is overpowered. Your sword is a "Dual stat sword" that just wouldn't work. Charges that "somehow" work and "Somehow" makes the blade stronger is not acceptable. This is the cynical side of me speaking when I say that I'd like to know how a brand new concept of weaponry works. Third: This is not a highschool RP. Every character thus far has fit into the world in some way, yours does not. [@Inuyasha][@Caits][@Tyrant from the West] Further deliberation between other members of the group will be had to further read into your characters. [quote=@Leolycan] It's a work in progress, but I was going to have you look over what I've got so far. Will be finishing the rest later. Name: Nicholas Norstrom Title: 'Specter', Nic, Nico Age: 27 Gender: Male [url=http://digital-art-gallery.com/oid/67/1200x768_12148_Character_sheet_2d_characters_robot_concept_art_sci_fi_picture_image_digital_art.jpg] Appearance [/url] [url=http://assets.vg247.com/current//2013/12/double_helix_unannounced_ip_art_3.jpg]Armor[/url] Weapons: [url=http://www.unknownworlds.com/oldwebsite/files/ns2/030510/Pistol.jpg]Pistol x2[/url] [url=http://img02.deviantart.net/88b5/i/2014/231/d/f/plasma_katana__wip_render__by_shiro_itami-d7vvptk.jpg] Superheated Katana[/url] Shaped Charges x4 Miscellaneous items: Ballcap Radio Dogtags Binoculars Biography: Born to a simple cyber-merchant family, Nico has been around technology for about as long as he's been alive. Tinkering with different mechanisims and gizmos, Nicolas grew up to be a well established engineer at his fathers shop, crafting all manner of mechanical devices for his father's patrons. However, growing up in 'boonies' was never enough for the boy, taking the first chance he had to join the military in an attempt to escape. It was there that he showed decent physical prowess, as well as a knack for improvising and espionage. It was for this reason he was recruited into the special-ops contingent, code name 'Veil'. Veil was responsible for anything that had to be done behind enemy lines and required a significant need for discretion. Often times the members of this squad were sent to assassinate key officers and officals, or damage/destroy relay stations or comm towers. Nico found a true calling there as his mechanical expertise assisted in creating makeshift explosives and rigging of hardware. This lifestyle would continue for years to come, until Nico took a stray laser round to his leg and was discharged from service. In longing for the thrills of his now past profession, Nico took to crafting his own armor that would accommodate for lack of agility since the wound to his leg. After completion of what was to later be known as the 'Specter' armor, Nicolas took a job as a free lance agent. Taking jobs at any opportunity for the chance to feel that 'rush' again, the man has found himself in the midst of new company aboard this air-ship. Extra: [/quote] I don't like to operate in PMs in regards to characters and such and would rather discuss him here in one message. Your character will be discussed with the chosen members as well. After discussing the RP with two other members, I have decided to put a hard limit on how many characters will be joining the crew: Ten. It hurts to say but some of you may not join the voyage. This is being done so that the RP will be easier to manage and not become a mosh pit of posts.