[@Blackmist16] Everything looks good, though where he can find good game to hunt in New York is beyond me XD Anywho read rule six and you are accepted :) [@Archangel89] Okay like I said before about the nerfing all of the powers seem like a bit much. The crown thing seems like it is trying to help with the situation but by how much, it still seems a bit vague. How much does it nerf him, is he still tossing eight tons around like it is nothing? Is he still pretty much indestructible? Is he still immortal? And if he is why would he retreat to Fabletown, he wouldn't have anything to fear about staying in the Homelands and fighting the Adversary's forces. Even the strongest of Fables are able to kick the bucket. The hair thing seems a bit much, being able to basically summon an army of yourself by shaving your head seems alike it can get out of hand. What can he transform into, that can also get out of hand if he can just shapeshift on the fly. Also, and this is just a small thing, Glamors are very strong magic it would take a lot to see through them, for him just to have the natural ability to can lead to some issues