[@Ace of flames01]

Wow, that's a good drawing.

A few words:

Both eyes of a Gifted don't just change color, one changes color while the other stays normal.

And other than a lack of capitalization, and a few other slight errors(Mostly in the Post Example), it looks fine. Just might need a little polishing up.

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In the end, it's up to Dark Templar to have the final say.