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[@ArkmageddonCat]oh ok! I didn't know that only one changes color and I have to apologize because my grammar and writing abilities aren't exactly top notch and I tend to have a bad habit of not capitalizing ^^" but i'll try to work on that...i'll fix my post real quick oh and could you tell me what error i made? i'd like to fix those bits.
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As long as you want to improve, I think it'll be fine.

Other than capitalization(pet peeve), just a few spacing errors, and few grammatical errors(Aren't a huge deal).

You fixed the paragraph spacing though.