[quote=@Hillan]
@Alan Hawke:
The Power/Ability section looks rather copy-pasted from any of the Wiki's he's on, which is fine. However, he does have several more weaknesses than dehydration, what are his psychological weaknesses, physical limitations and other things that would hinder him and make it necessary for him to have a team? 

Should be noted the entire sheet looks like it belongs in a Young Justice thread, and not in a Teen Titans RP that occurs after the Comics, where Garth was Aqualad some ten years ago and is now Tempest, for instance. I know that writing CS's is tedious, but I'd like a little more effort on your part put into the CS. Your sample post is great, so good work on that.

So overall revise and I'll look over it again.


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I just finished the psychological weaknesses. I'm trying to think of more things that would hinder him that the team could make up for.