[@Minimum] I'm sorry it took me forever to reply to you. I was thinking about waiting for the other guy's CS (and was also working on the next post). But in any case, it looks a bit better now. You can jump in, but just make sure there's a good reason for him to be involved in the Battle on Coruscant. (Joined up with the Dark Jedi invasion force, Is acting as a mercenary there doing some other job, is there for own personal reasons and just got caught in the middle of the fighting, etc.)

@Everyone: I put up the post I was working on, but decided to cut it short (earlier than I intended it to stop) because I felt it was taking me far too long to get it up, and I wanted to give you guys something new to read as there hasnt been much posting for a while.