[quote=@Eklispe]
Well here he is, feel free to critic. I assumed we would also start at class level of 0
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[b]Name:[/b] Arus

[b]Race:[/b] Human

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[hider=Appearance]???(WIP)[/hider]


[b]Nation:[/b] Valm 


[b]Class:[/b] Myrmidon


[b]Character Level:[/b] 
	 1  (0/100)



[b]Class Level: Myrmodin [/b]
	1   (0/100)


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[b]Hp:[/b] 25

(Excel)[b]STR:[/b] 15

(Lack)[b]MAG:[/b] 3 

(Excel)[b]SKL: [/b] 15

(Excel)[b]SPD: [/b] 15(17)

[b]LCK: [/b] 6

(Lack)[b]DEF: [/b]3	

(Lack)[b]RES: [/b] 3

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[b]Equipment[/b]
	
[b]Armor: [/b]
(Custom) Mage-weave cloth: +2 speed, Take 2 more damage from damaging magic and receive 2 more HP from healing magic.(Description) This cloth enhances the flow of energy around the wearing allowing them to act more quickly, however it also acts as a conduit for magic causing it to affect the wearer more easily.
	

[b]Weapon:[/b] (Exotic Sword) Killing Edge

[b]Other: [/b]
Vulenary
Silver Locket
Whetting Stone
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[hider=Unique]
[b]Skills: [/b]
Myrmidon Job Traits
1. [b]Skillful Edge[/b]- Arus gain's deals additional damage based of off his skill(25%)
2. [b]Vengeful Blade[/b]- When Arus is reduced below half health he gains crit chance(25%) and instantly retaliates if it was a melee attack
Character Traits
1. [b]Chivalry[/b]- If an ally would receive fatal damage Arus can redirect the attack to himself
2. [b]Wounded Warrior[/b]- When Arus drops below half health he takes half damage.

[b]Quirks:[/b]
Doesn't get jokes
Doesn't eat meat
Almost never sleeps
Enjoys cooking and cleaning
Writes poetry in his spare time
Enjoys juice


[b]Bonds:[/b]N/A

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Is see what your going for here, and most of it is fine. However, I would rather see wounded warrior decrease damage by a flat amount or lower percentage. Also, make chivalry a nearby ally. Fix that, and you're  good.

Edit: I just noticed the 'Killing' weapon. At first you're going to have only simple arms at your disposal, nothing that will effect stats. You're free to have an exotic sword, that just means it'll be like a double bladed sword or something to that effect, but it won't provide any benefits at the moment.