[@Blackmist16]
Ok, not bad. Nice concept, very Frank Miller. Couple of points: 

We're going for more of a silver age, comical thing here. Trying to avoid gratuitous killing and soul collection. Foiling bad guys, maybe get your own theme music eventually. Think Adam West Batman. Guys just starting out as Heroes in a world that needs them, and they're not the flashy "A List" guys. These heroes are The Other Guys. Hokey, homespun heroics with a cheese factor of a Limburger factory explosion. Comically flawed individuals. 

Come at me with something low powered and full of personality. 


(and yes, Red Mage is my hero)