[quote=@Savato]
[@Xuna] Once again, follow step 2. Compare text length to the rest, it doesn't have to be exactly that size but you can easily pull an average. That's generally how much is needed in High-Casual (yes we're pretentious enough to consider ourselves that). You can do the same with personality, you essentially say how he behaves for now, and if it evolves, well, you can always edit it according to various events that build up his identity. Everyone has done it here, so you can to. 

You don't have to avoid the word 'Hell', but naming every jutsu with that word in it and not giving a single explanation as to why other than it sounding cool is cliché and generally pointless. I wouldn't really care if you explained the jutsu, but right now it's just not cutting it. 
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Lol I did have a description for the "hell" in there but I must of deleted it and forgot to re-type. It'll be done