[quote=@Psyga315]
[@Weird Tales]

Okay, I'm gonna just be brutally honest here.

The only things you changed was removing mention of how powerful the voice is at low volumes and made the implication that she was raped more subtle. A violation of Rules 2 and 3 of the RPG. Rule 3 in particular states that while it's okay to [i]have[/i] a sexual situation here and there, so long as said activity is subtle or implied (which you did), any and all parties involved in the sex act must be of legal age.

Something your character is implied to not be in the backstory. While I find a nun character to be interesting considering the people that started the conflict are soul-ripping genies, at the same time, I want to ensure that the character in question is good enough to be in the RPG. I've read your character's powers again, and while they don't give off the impression of being OP, there's still the implications that it is.

I'm going to have to reject this. Sorry.

[@knighthawk]
Okay, I'm just gonna point out right off the bat that the RPG doesn't need you to literally make a D&D sheet. Points for effort though. Also, I want to point out that Rule 5 states that all OCs made after July 16th, 2015 have to be of Earth origin. Not to mention that Epic-level D&D characters aren't the best idea for early-game characters, since they are literally the equivalent of Gods compared to the early-game characters.

[@Green Rhapsody]
Not seeing anything wrong with this. Accepted.
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Okay but the other guy is in right?