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[hider=Laynette Navarro]Name: Laynette Navarro
Age: 21
Magic: Blade Enhancement Magic (Magic that allows the user to apply enhancements upon a (specifically bladed) weapon. Only one at a time, but can do two at a massive extra cost of magic power, which this individual does not have.)
Magic Level: A
History: [Insert moderately dis-interesting backstory, not a ‘generational’ of Iron Enigma]
Personality: Fairly clever, but is fairly good at reading a situation, especially pertaining to her. Fairly egocentric, but can think of others when she tries.
Team Members: Unnamed Member of Iron Enigma.
Three Strengths:
1. Has learned to use many different types of weapons.
2. Fairly Social
3. Doesn’t have a bounty over her head.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Only has superficial training in each kind of weapon
2. Winded easily
3. Very blunt (Pun intended)
Greatest Love: Fighting
Motivation: To become a great warrioress.
Appearance: [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/79/4c/e0/794ce0112a3dd86b0e8b98a9652b6005.jpg[/img]
Additional Details:[/hider]

Also, on the Games summary, Iron Enigma came in fourth on the first challenge, not... Sixth

Lucas was also second to last,

And, the numbers after the names should be the points they scored, correct? Second place got 8 Points. At least according to the announcers on page 195

*Is in fact checking mode*

So the scores should be something like:

Jack - 10
Lazarus - 8
Zander - 6
Mark - 4
Rose - 3
Soren - 2
Lucas - 1
Pakuna - 0

At least, I'm assuming you want Pakuna to be last, otherwise Lucas was, in fact, last. His escape post being on 196 while the rest of the game was on 195.
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Thank you. I was going on memory, as I was too tired to go searching, hoping someone would pick up any mistakes.