[@SpiritedDream], here's a bit of review:
Everything up to species characteristics is good.

perhaps note the Epicanthix’ epicanthic folds as a species trait as well as the others?

Flaws aren’t numerous, but they affect her significantly, so they are fine.

Skills are ok, we think.

Force powers ok.

Bio:
There were other training centers for Jedi than the Coruscant temple. The majority were actually trained on the innumerable satellite academies. 

The resort planet is named Alassa Major, not Alyssa major.

The rest of the Bio seems ok.h

It would not hurt to have a few more relations. Feel free to make them up based on who you think she might know. Its for example likely that she has at least met Lea, seeing how they shared a master. She would perhaps also have felt Ral Shodon’s death two months prior to the Sacking.

She may also know of Darth Nyiss beforehand, as Darth Nyiss is a somewhat significant political figure despite being a recluse.


History - do you know much SW history yourself/ are you willing to research it?