[quote=@Vesuvius00] [@SiliconColt] I'm here, I just didn't get any notification from the mention in the OP post for some reason... I'm ok with everything discussed so far, here's my character: Plays the Flute and Piccolo HC: Can create structures and creatures with sound and control them with the melody from the instrument, when playing the Piccolo the structures and creatures are stronger because of the higher pitch of the tone. Trouble: Has asthma/other breathing problems so is bad at athletics and can't play for extremely long amounts of time. Structures and creatures break or disappear when they stop playing. [/quote] uh HC: sum it down to a phrase or sentence. I see you have specific powers but that's not really describing the character. Maybe "Green Lantern x Piccolo/Flue Player" would describe the character as an aspect. Trouble doesn't need to incorporate the power. But "Has Asthma" seems all that you need for a trouble. With HC and other aspects in general its not about describing a power or ability but instead a title, reputation, or obligation which defines very little as opposed to giving a vague idea of who a character is instead. What the character can do is best described with skills which we'll get to after the Origin story where people give their character first "adventure" which in this case is their first battle/competition.