[quote=@DarkwolfX37] So I'm probably the least nice person here so I'll free myself up to be blunt. Please note that none of this is meant to offend, insult, make fun of, or belittle you. [hider=Your Grammar] You seem to have a below-standard, which is about the modern average, level of grammar. If it would help, feel free to use grammar instruction sites for help. You definitely will need to improve at the least your spelling, capitalization, and spacing after commas. Any further needed corrections will show themselves as you continue here. [/hider] [hider=Your Character(s)] I understand the appeal of taking a character from various series. We all do it. But in Myriad Reality, it's necessary to apply the series' rules and assets to the in-RP story. [/hider] [hider=Advice] I would suggest reading the [url=http://myriad-reality.wikia.com/wiki/Myriad_Reality_Wiki]wiki[/url], and the first few pages of the IC and OOC, as well as the most recent 10-20 pages of each. I'd also say it's a good idea to try to take advice from everyone, notably Whizz so far. He's commented on commas multiple times, perhaps you missed one or two of the mentions, but you responded to at least one. It's also prudent to note that for all intents and purposes, LegendBegins has the final say on a lot of things. Please do not try to argue with him unless it's peacefully disagreeing and working towards a compromise/solution. [/hider] [hider=OOC Things To Know] Everyone here bar one person has multiple accounts. These include but are not limited to: DarkwolfX37 - The World LegendBegins - Techspert - Nimda - Etcetera - Whizzball - Mammalia - SpiritBlitz - Zeal - Galaxy Raider - Heroic - ToxicDiamond - souleaterfan320 - It's also notable that we try to keep the Abrahamic religions out of the RP. (Barring a few notable exceptions that I'm still iffed about.) We also tend to use other religions' stories as misunderstood versions of events if we use them at all. In short, try to keep religion out of the RP. [/hider] Good luck and hopefully you'll fit in/have fun. [/quote] Thanks for the advice and the other stuff, I'll keep it in mind as best I can. And [@Mammalia]I am caught back up now.