[quote=@Crimson Raven] Okay, here comes my two cents. Wow, that magic might be a little over powered. She can seduce the enemy, heal allies, transport herself, nullify their magic, AND put up a barrior that allows others to attack but not be attacked. My advice is put something in there that allows the moves to be easily dodged, or conditional. (i.e. the barrior is invisible, but can be walked in and out of. The nullify just reduces the power of the magic. And the opponent has to be distracted for the seducement to work.) One last thing, maybe a little more personality? A past like that is bound to leave trauma of one kind or another. [/quote] While the sentiment is appreciated, please slow down and let the GMs give their input first. I can speak from experience that some people get offended if someone other than the GM says anything and I'd rather not have a war start in the OOC.