wow a lot happened while i was away! ok, let's see if i can take this in order. [@lord coake]: biggest issue is probably the age thing, but acer's already covered that. i am a little confused about the emotion thing though. so he's crazy except for when he uses his powers, which are triggered by emotions, but when he uses his powers, they automatically make him grim? so his powers are controlled by his emotions but then it becomes the other way around? and then he has to keep that all the time or he goes crazy again. hmm. maybe i'm just overthinking things. if acer doesn't have issue with it then i suppose you can just ignore this. maybe some further explanation for my benefit tho? [@letter bee]: as always, acer has the final say, but from my perspective the revamped powers for lucas are looking better. could be interesting to see him and sebastian fight for control over a blood soaked environment (though from the descriptions of the characters, i think i know who'd win that battle). [@blizz]: rai and wizliz have already covered the primary issue with this, which is that you seem to be adding entirely new lore to this universe – which isn't a bad thing per se. there's nothing wrong with coming up with history or relationships to help expand the world. the thing about metas though, is while they are all very diverse people with a wide range of powers, it's generally accepted that all their abilities come from the same source. i don't think acer has decided completely on what that source is yet, or how much we're going to explore it within the rp, but i'm fairly certain it's not a supernatural alternate dimension. that's not to say that this dimension can't exist via your character's powers, and maybe his ability to access it for example, but it can't be the [i]source[/i] of his power. with the exception of characters like clementine, whose natural abilities are augmented with science, all characters inherited their powers without their knowledge, through no special means. please also include more details about this character's abilities and ranking, so we can understand him better and see if anything else needs to be edited before being accepted.