[@Darkmatter]
Perhaps my nihilism is a bit misplaced, I just rechecked the interest thread, and a few people have noticed it. 
I'd still like to learn how to be much better at all this, I want to know why some stuff works and what doesn't.
[url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/84007-an-expedition-beyond-the-world-a-low-fantasy-exploration-game/ooc#post-2873057[/url]
Tell me, is my opening thing to brief? I've seen a lot of other interest checks with full, page long IC hooks and whatnot, and I only have a few paragraphs.