[@Blizz]

Addressing a few points:

Dat naim indeed. It's right up there with Edge Maverick and Angus MacGyver for the title of "Awesome McCoolname"

Dynasty is good, but this would just be tagged on to the end of your normal name in the CS. No need to make a new section for it.
[b]Name[/b]: Jack Daggerswift

By limit, I meant duration. He can't stay invisible forever, or else it's just unfair.

Yup, Bloodlust looks good. Sam Spark suffers something similar - could be another good plot point.

I think, personally, your character should be more stabby-stealthy oriented rather than magic based. I'd just drop the Dark Spawn altogether and replace with a more spider-like ability i.e. poison bite or constriction. All your other spells have this down, so the "summon evil monster from the realms of Oblivion" thing looks a little out-of-place.

So structured (the way I do it - everyone has a unique style) like:
[b]Traits:[/b]
Funny, Smart, Calm - Deceitful, Quiet - Bloodthirsty, Violent
Look good?

Well, we need some kind of backstory and the GM doesn't accept "Can't remember". MAybe he accidently killed his family shortly after transforming? I don't know, I'm making stuff up here.

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Hey, one more thing. This might seem like nitpicking, but could you put capital letters on important details and spaces after low punctuation marks? It would just make the whole thing so much easier to read.

You have it written like - 
Sickness:occasionally his blood "argues"with his shadowleg blood,making him nauseous and sometimes cause him to get very,very tired and fall asleep,which would be when he were to get better

But it would much easier to read if it looked like this - 
Sickness: Occasionally his human blood "argues" with his Shadowleg blood, making him nauseous and causes him to get very, very tired and fall asleep. He generally recovers after resting.

If you want, I can PM a few things to you that would improve readability. Again, I don't mean to sound patronising, it's just a struggle for me personally.