[quote=@rivaan] [b]Name:[/b] Miyako Sora [b]Race:[/b] Human [b]Age:[/b] 31 [b]Appearance:[/b] 1,73 centimeters tall, with straight black hair reaching just above the shoulder. She has dark brown, nearly back eyes. She has soft and nimble hands with which she carries out her work as surgeon. She has a black tattoo in the form of a broken chain across her lower back, one on her left shoulder in the form of stylized angel wing and another one on her right in the form of stylized demon wing. [b]Title:[/b] Doctor /[b]Military rank:[/b] Colonel [b]Nationality:[/b] Japanese [b]Organization:[/b] Homeworld Command [b]Skills:[/b] Medical degree post-doctoral training in surgery Degree in biology Military training (specialized in sharpshooting) Eight dan in Kendo. [b]History:[/b] Miyako was born in a military family. As such from an young age, she knew she will end up in the family business so to say. Still combat wasn't a thing she was attracted to as much as medicine. So as compromise, while she still joined the military for her family, she still finished her medical degree. In kind of a rebellious phase, a few years after joining the military, she went ahead and got herself those tattoos after a huge falling out between her and her parents. Things escalated to the point where she was disowned, but she paid that no mind. Instead of getting hang over that incident, she concentrated on her career. Slowly, but steadily she escalated through the ranks until she reached the rank of colonel, which she took as great honor for herself. One day she was approached by some higher ups with a proposition.'Was she willing to join a some kind of project.' According to them this was going to be a one time proposition, if she was to refuse it now, she will never be approached or see the two of them again. Seeing how she already broke ties with her relatives a few years ago and the fact herself had no family, Miyako decided this was only the natural progress forward so she readily said yes. That was how she joined the SGC. [b]Personality: [/b] Miyako is in general very calm and collected person. She is very hard to get agitated or angry, but once that fuse has been lit, explosion is bound to happen. She likes to spend time among people and have nice chats with them. Another thing she likes to do is spar whenever it's possible. Be it with weapons or just hand to hand, she enjoys every kind of fight as it proves excellent way to relieve stress. As practitioner of Kendo, her main strength is sword fighting, though the experience and knowledge she acquired with the sword proves useful in hand to hand combat too as her reflexes are fast and her vision sharp. Another weakness Miyako has is towards alcohol. She likes to drink sake, though the military regulations make it difficult to drink freely, so that's mostly reserved for when she is off duty. how's this one? Anything I need to edit? [/quote] 1) Rank I will let [@Forsythe] comment on. 2) A Degree in Biology, and a Medical Doctor that can perform surgery at 31... in the Military? :P Might want to cut one out (Probably biology) doesn't mean you can't contribute to any medical problems. Like Fraiser or Beckett did. 3) You can't train to be in the military while at university, at least not in any country I know ;) A way to really spite your family, if that's what you wanted to do would be for her to join the Military... and then to become a medic/doctor. 4) Theres two gaps, I personally only care about one. Between joining the SGC and being stationed aboard the [i]Nyx[/i] what did she do to prove herself worthy of joining such a small team?