[quote=@rivaan] Righto~ I will start editing those thigns... good thing I saved the word file... hehehe. as for the family thing, well the idea was her family were military, so as compromise between her and familly she both became a doc and join military for everybody to win~ I think the fall out between her and her family will be somethign not connected to story like, maybe a boyfriend... or trying to ahve her marry or something stupid like that that usually causes the familly frictions in animes and tv shows. and okey I will think of what will happen in that gap. ^_^ [/quote] Well I think the best way to do that then, which makes sense would be maybe she starts University to become a Doctor then gets pushed into signing up when she leaves a qualified Doctor?