[@rivaan]: I see nothing wrong. She certainly has the combat merit to earn the rank and it would be also why black would notice and consider hiring her.

The assault rifle I picked is a bullpup design, meaning it has the size of a submachine gun while keeping the assault rifle firepower. SMG thus is unnecessary, not to mention IRL P90 is GARBAGE. the 'P' stands for prototype, there's a reason for that.

Anyhow, welcome on board doc =)

[@mrambo90]: I agree with Sep, that sheet needs a little more. He pretty much summed up my thoughts. the way you formatted it is a bit hard to read, and the history doesn't say much. Also, there were a lot of people on Atlantis, and Black would be assembling this crew by herself. It's not necessary, but something that stands out would definitely earn you a spot.