[quote=@Darcs] [i]>TheMostBeautifulGirlInTheWorld_FrankSinatra.mp3[/i] Shes p hot tho [/quote] :3 [quote=@Monochromatic Rainbow] [@GreivousKhan] Something missing from your backstory- Immortalis stuff. You didn't cover the circumstances she was in and such when she developed her abilities. [/quote] I made some edits to go into more background detail.