[quote=BanalityPanda]
I finished it! I can change anything you need my to or whatever, but I guess this is a possible first draft? :3
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If you're trying to steal my explosive spotlight, then I'd have to kill you buddy *Grabs Zanpakuto* e.e

But it looks good....Atleast, approval wise. I'd rather not criticize the backstory for that's not really important, just add cooldowns for your abilities and you'd be all good.