[quote=@Mrambo90]
They were sent to Daedalus-class battlecruiser and sent Atlantis to bolster security and search and rescue away teams. With their arrival they were thrown into the fire with Queen Death’s fleet closing on Atlantis.Following the resolution of Queen Death’s fleet Masaru quickly worked to earn his place and gained a team after a daring rescue of a fellow team after a daylong intense fire fight aboard a crashed Ancient ship against rouge Genii faction seeking weapons. After Drawing away a portion of the rouge faction Masarus and the other Japanese soldier followed orders, They Lead the Genii into multiple troops they set up and slowly picked them apart in the day long guerrilla war in the ship. Masarus’s Combat/ search and rescue team walked into a wraith trap when they answered a distress call from a allied tribe when they were ambushed by wraith well searching a small hamlet. During a long rolling battle and the loss of two of his men, he had finally run out of ammo and turned away another S&R team.He began crawling across fourteen kilometers and losing wraith pursuers over a period of two days he finally got himself back to the star gate dragging his last injured teammate the whole way back to the star gate
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Something about this doesn't seem quite right. I think, it is just the way it reads. I think maybe the way to fix this is separate the Genii and Wraith missions into separate paragraphs?