[@Boomrocker]: Sorry, I have some issues here. To start with, him possibly being trained by the remnants of the Witch-Queen's army doesn't much make sense. She was running an enormous coven, her army was largely magic-users. Even the ones still around went into hiding when she was seemingly killed. Basically he'd have to be over eight-hundred years old and a mage for that, and while that's possible he's clearly not a mage. If he just appears in random places why exactly is he going to a party? He seems more like the type of character who'd be working towards gathering an army or something. Speaking of his armies... just about the only two people who have ever achieved a large army of orcs were Hidroroth and his successor, Izandrath. They were respectively a god and something comparable to an angel. Not even the Witch-Queen got them following her, because they're pretty nasty in their outlook on anyone but other orcs or things they can use to fight. Even if he killed a lot of them, they most they ever do with humans that isn't killing or capturing them is sell captives they don't eat to slavers. [@SilverDawn]: I don't see problems here, accepted. [@MonkeyBusiness]: While I won't give anything final until he's finished, why does he have a katana in a more European fantasy setting? I mean, there IS a fantasy Japan equivalent but unless he went there it's unlikely that he got one of their swords. And he's probably not from there given that Hundi are from West Ithillin. ^^;