[@JELDare] The character shows promise, but I'll be honest - the CS doesn't have the level of quality we're looking for here. I ask for full paragraphs in all the sections, and two lines doesn't cover that. Some starting points on what to add can be facial appearance and casual attire in appearance, more layers of personality, reason for becoming a superhero in biography, specific descriptions and limitations of his magic.

Also remember that this is the casual roleplay section, meaning I will be expecting a moderate literary level in posts, including full paragraphs and proper grammar.

I hope this helps, I would be otherwise thrilled to have you join this RP!