So I've finished mines too. I'm not too sure about the dialogue but I tried T_T  lol
It was really hard for me to envision and get into that leader-mentality. Than I thought to myself, why not have the skeleton there but have him develop into it. 
Anyway, meet Ethan everyone! 

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[color=lightblue][h1][i]Ethan Peyton Rakes[/i][/h1][/color]
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[h2][b]What's your name?[/b][/h2]
[i][b]E[/b]than Rakes, but you know this already. The school knows this, your faculty knows this, and I'm pretty sure others schools know this too. What's it for if you don't mind me asking? You pulled me outta of class right when Ms. Hoffman was spitting on everyone while trying to talk. Oldman: Ethan Rakes would call that rude. God bless his soul.[/i]

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[h3][b]How old are you?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]E[/b]ighteen, senior. Why so many questions out've the blue? Couldn't you just look on my record? [/i]

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[h3][b]What do you look like?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]A[/b]lright, guess I'll play along. I'm pretty thin as you can see, I work out a little so I'm not scrawny. The track team keeps me running. Over the summer I've built up my core, wanna see my abs? Their really impressive. 

[b]A[/b]nyway, I have dark brown hair and light brown eyes, thank my mom for those. Uhh, last I checked I was 5'11”. Personally, I find my broad chest but slender core a bit ... off putting but everyone else seems to like it. I like to wear layers. A v-neck underneath a flannel or jean-jacket is usually how I go out. Silver necklaces and stuff kill my skin though. I hate that though man. The potential is there but I just can't do it. 

[b]W[/b]hen I was traveling around the world with my folks, I pulled a few things from the different cultures. Asians are really ... different but I like that. Had a Asian girlfriend once. Had to cut her off when I found out I was moving.[/i]

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[h3][b]Do you have any hobbies?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]H[/b]obbies? who has those anymore?

[b]D[/b]oes running count? not track but running. The team is cool and everything but I was running before I could walk. When my family would travel to different countries, the one constant I had was running. It sorta takes the edge off of everything for me. My eldest brother and me use to play card games a lot when I was younger, I think we stopped when I was around eight. I never caught on to it like he did but I still play from time to time. 

[b]O[/b]h! I like to cloud-watch. Yea, hehe. I know its weird for the star of the track team to be airy, but they have endless potential man, its crazy. One minute its formless, the next its a castle. Don't tell the guys, they already think I'm a loner as is.[/i]

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[h3][b]What are some things that you especially dislike?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]C[/b]andy. Yea, I really dislike candy. A lot of people enjoy the crap but I just don't care for it. Its like poison for your mouth, except they don't carry warning labels. Speaking of which, I also hate smoking ... My eldest brother got lung cancer from that shit. Whenever I see someone doing it, I just get pissed off. I can't even explain how much that bothers me.  

[b]O[/b]h and I don't like Ms. Hoffman … she spits when she talks. And she's desperate as hell. You should really look into her background again, its ugly to watch a lady--no matter how good she looks--throw herself at someone. Its the same as smelling fear on another person. Just try to deny the instinct to bully, its hard as hell. But y'know, as star of the track team I have a obligation to be better than most. Plus, I've been there before. I use to be that kid all by himself in the lunchroom. [/i]

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[h3][b]What are your goals for the future? Both immediate and long-term[/b][/h3]
[i][b]T[/b]he future … I think about that a lot. And honestly, I'm still not sure. My dad thinks I should take over the family's taxidermy business, which wouldn't be a bad idea if I wasn't so stubborn. Usually if I see something I want to do, I attack it. But when you're surrounded with other opinions you have to be willing to listen. I've never been too good at that. One of the reasons I like track so much, sure you're called a team but at the end of the day, its just you and the track. The others don't matter.

[b]I[/b] think, in the grand scheme of things, I want to explore the world on my own. 

[b]G[/b]irlfriends? Hehe that always seems to come up. I don't know. If the right one stumbles in front of me sure. But I've never been a romantic. Every girlfriend I've had was a spontaneous decision. Let the dice fall where they fall is what I say. [/i]

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[h3][b]What's your home life like? Specifically, what is your relationship like with your parents?[/b][/h3]
[I][b]W[/b]ell … That's a bit personal dontcha think? [b]D[/b]o I have to answer that question? You're telling [/i]me[i] I have to? 

[b]F[/b]ine, ummm. Uh, Its … difficult at the moment. My dad's business isn't doing too well because of my mom's  habits, my eldest brother is ignoring my existence--probably because his cancer is spreading or something. I try not to be cynical but its hard. Only good thing at the moment is my mom's growing a backbone ... finally. Which, sorta leads to fights in the house. They call it "loud debates" though, so everything's okay. 

[b]S[/b]uch a nice exterior huh? You would never guess.[/i] 

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[h3][b]What's your favorite animal, and why?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]W[/b]ait, what? Well that's weird. 

[b]A[/b]lright, alright, I'll answer the question. Hmm? If I had to choose an animal, I'd say a Lion. The reason is a bit cheesy but hear me out. Before my brother ... got sick, he use to take me to the zoo alot. All he ever wanted to see was the Lions but every time we went they weren't in their habitat or cage, or whatever you wanna call it. When he finally did see 'em, he smiled from ear to ear. [/i]That[i] is the strongest memory of him I have. I want to cherish it. 

[b]B[/b]esides, they're kings of the beast and protectors. They're strong alone but their not above teaming up with their family to get the tougher jobs done either. Plus, well, their manes flares out like fire. I like that.[/i]

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[h3][b]Favorite color?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]S[/b]ky blue. Its a cool, refreshing hue. I like that haha, I keep saying that. Its a tick I got from my pops. Anyway, I don't like warmth or hot, anything that appears sweltering is annoying to me. The color sky blue reminds me of the clouds, breezes, and just all around cool things. 

[b]O[/b]h shit, I'm hella late for my next class. I have a team project to present and the others are depending on me.[/i]

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[h3][b]Do you identify with any song or piece of music?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]N[/b]ow I know you're yanking my chain. Haha. 

[b]L[/b]ately I've been listening to Zedd. Mainly his single Clarity. 

[b]M[/b]y brother. The song reminds me of my relationship with my brother, its hope for me sometimes. Don't tell [i]anyone[/i]. The guys would either act weird or nitpik, I can't handle either one at the moment. 

[b]A[/b]nyway, I use to look up to him for guidance. Since he's disappeared off the face of the earth, stopped returning my phone calls, texts, and emails; I've been a bit lost. Listen to it sometimes, it might give you a clearer image of what I'm feeling.[/i]

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[h3][b]Do you believe in aliens?[/b][/h3]
[i][b]I[/b]'m iffy about it. I won't rule 'em out but I'm not searching for 'em either. If they show, they better be prepared for war. Humanity tends to attack what it doesn't understand. 

[b]I[/b]s it over? Finally ... that was oddly, refreshing. Thanks for listening.[/i][/center][/hider]