[quote=@Renny]
So I've finished mines too. I'm not too sure about the dialogue but I tried T_T  lol
It was really hard for me to envision and get into that leader-mentality. Than I thought to myself, why not have the skeleton there but have him develop into it. 
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A few things before he can be accepted, although I like what you have so far.

First and foremost, the sheet's pretty formal, and because of the stiff, formal tone, we don't find much out about Ethan. From the sheet we know Ethan is a track runner who plays cards. If it were written less formally, maybe there'd be more to find out about him?

I like that you're instilling a feeling of "Confident Prep", and that works for a leader, but I want to know [i]more[/i]. Clay is a bully who thinks descriptive-ity is a word, but he's also clearly very insecure and is a fan of traditional geek culture in secret. Keira has a perfect SAT score and works at a museum, but she's also hyperactive and communicates through pictures of cats on the internet. He fits the preppy leader role well, but I'd like to see him fleshed out more. Maybe he hates the smell of smoke because his mom's expenses are gambling, and she'd bring him to casinos! Maybe track is important to him because he's got one leg! Maybe everybody thinks he likes track, but he prefers taxidermy! Stuff like that would be neat. Flesh him out, make him a little more three-dimensional, and we'll be all good. I want to know more about his personality, maybe some of his backstory, et cetera.