[@DeadBeatWalking][@dead anime dad][@UrbanEvolution]

Perhaps you guys can help me out with this one ^^

Even if with the critique I'm having difficulty figuring this out. I'm usually pretty good with fleshing out a characters dialogue in Rp. Most can tell how my characters are saying something by the actions their doing. But, when it comes to just dialogue, I'm having difficulty. 
HELP!?