I dunno, DD, James seems a little bland, and his bio kinda doesn't make sense. It sounds like he just casually waved his hands wanting the dark to go away, and his Semblance just happened to activate then? And then he made up a deity to pray to, I dunno, seems unrealistic to me. And he's supposed to have gone to a school like Signal or Sanctum to prepare to go to Beacon, but I get the feeling from the CS that he just trained privately. But I could be wrong, as it's not explicitly stated how he trained to be a Hunter, but the vagueness is also a problem.

Personally, , and I'm not trying to be rude or anything (I'm very sorry if I come off as such. >~<), I'd change up some things. Having relatively simple weapons isn't a problem, Jaune pretty much just has a sword and shield, and having a limited Semblance isn't really an issue either (Though I think having light and blinding people as your unique power doesn't give you much to work with, but it's possible to expand with it as the story progresses), I just think his backstory could use a little work, and his personality could be expanded upon to be more unique. It just feels like the character's lacking definition, to me, I hope that doesn't come across as rude.

Also, peeps, where on the body would a Bird Faunus have their thingies? I'm thinking either wings on the head or small ones on the back, Lorelei is a Sparrow Faunus, but I wasn't sure where you guys would think would be good to have the signs.