[@GreenGoat] Just a few things to fix and you're good to go. Since there is no evasion rate in this, get rid of the word on Sukunda and add the following: "Foe's roll decreases by 1". On Rakunda, add: "Damage to foe increases by 10%". Finally, I would like you to add some actual resistances and weaknesses. On an initial Persona, I think it makes more sense.

[@Cerberus0807] Lower the Weapon damage to say 23 and add this to Rebellion: "Roll 15-20 for a Critical Hit." Like GreenGoat, I want you to have some resistances and weaknesses for an initial Persona.

[@Zendrelax] I need you to lower Cleave's damage to at least 27 or lower both Zio and Garu to at least 28. And man, that's a tough name hahaha