[@Jangel13]
I was waiting until you were done to comment. But if you want I can say a couple things now. 

A) I wouldn't mind if you fixed up the grammar and formatting a little bit just to make it more organized and easy to read. But it's a first draft so don't worry too much about it.

B) Warlocks aren't human XD They're the rare happenings of a successful union between a demon and a human type being - usually a half fey, half human female. These unions aren't normally conceptual either. You could probably work that into his backstory too.

C) Can you organize the likes and dislikes into a list? I can only see two likes and one dislike in there.