[quote=@Strawberry425] [@Obscene Symphony] The one problem is that the CS seems to insinuate the character knows the other soul is his twin, which I said none of the characters knew, though I'm not sure if I'm reading your CS wrong. [@McHaggis] Just saw your char. I shall get to reading the CS straight away! [/quote] Oh, that factor entirely slipped my mind! I'll do some editing. ***EDIT*** I think I fixed it, if there are still issues then I'd be happy to fix them. Still, I'm a bit confused as to how the host should perceive the twin. Maybe he knows there's another consciousness there, but doesn't know it's his consumed twin?