[@Grimoire]

I like it, you're free to add it to the character section.

[@Sophrus]

Magic is fine, within certain limits: as long as you don't get too overpowered with spells, I'm all for it. About your backstory, two things: first of all, please re-read it and fix a few typos and punctuation errors. Also, about the spirit mentioned in the second paragraph, please, add some more information about it: is it a Phantom or something else? What is it doing that deep in the Catacombs? Why does it want to help your character?

Apart from these, your character is approved.