[quote=@Lugia]
Describe things around you, describe people around you. How would your character react/what would they think of their surroundings? Keep these sort of things in mind when posts come up too short, basically, try to add what some authors refer to as 'fluff' when you're having trouble making a decently-sized post.
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That usually works but he already described the tent and the silence until the armored man came in. There might be something I can add but it still wont amount to much...

Edit: Better?