Ooo, great! So, I was thinking about the disease and how we're going to implement it into the story. Now, how does it sound if the disease originates more from the Shadow/Windclan sort of area and hasn't really touch ThunderClan yet (well, not killed anyone off, anyway). And then we'd have Ravencoat and a few kits get ill (and ill-er) which makes the clan suddenly aware of the illness. Just so we don't have loads of deaths at the start, we can slowly start killing cats off after that.