I need to go ahead and add Branded to the Races at some point. Also agree with Pi that half-Manakete shouldn't be a thing. Anyone with a Manakete in mind go ahead and add both myself and Penultimate_Pi to the same message to enhance your chances of one of us seeing it.

[@Crimson Raven], [@Sagittarius] hit the nail on the head. 14 points is plenty for the beginning, and the Great Knight and Dread Fighter-type classes are ultimately advanced classes anyway. You can either have that Class Feature or that extra weapon proficiency, but not both. Also, there are 5 skills listed under Class Creation: Strength, Constitution, Agility, Skill, and Mentality. Give it another read, I haven't modified the post in any way.

[@AquaAzura] I like the character concept, she sounds like she'd fit the "entitled noble" role pretty well! Lotta potential for character growth there. I'm going to go ahead and take the Class Feature for "increased damage reduction against weapon attacks at the cost of mobility" but ultimately different from the main stats.

[@Eisenhorn]Picture's still broken for me just in case you made a try at a fix. I also like him as well, Calev's got a real "team player" vibe going on. One issue, though: you've one skill rank too many. You can add a single skill rank or keep that cool Class Feature, but not both. This is just me, but I'd prefer it if you kept the Class Feature because it's pretty original and a neat concept. But that's up to you.

[@Eklispe]Sorry, but you're a little off. It's not the cost for [i]increasing[/i] skill ranks, but what the skill ranks cost flat out. So that D would cost you two points, but to get to C won't cost you 3 more points, just 1 more point. 3 points is the total cost of a C rank. Like if you wanted to go from C to B, it'd cost you a grand total of 1 point. You're thing with the weapon is spot on, though, choosing to be proficient in only one weapon will give you 15 points to start over 14.

Everyone else, I'll be in and out for the next few weeks. I found out today that my brother's in the hospital with sepsis so I'm getting on a plane on Saturday to go visit him. It's not gonna be fun.