...Oops. That's what I get for not reading the whole thread.

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[@Eisenhorn] Everything looks to be in order, but keep in mind that since our initial group will be mostly run by the players, you may be asked to alter your history if want to be in the initial group - otherwise, you could always retain your separate history and simply choose to join the players later, under some circumstances. We'll figure it out once we get the OOC started proper.

[@AquaAzura] You wouldn't need to change anything fundamental about your biography, but it should be explained why such a high-status character like her would bother with a simple lowly mercenary group. Is she just using them as an escort, or does she see something in this group that made her want to join?
But yes, she would otherwise be ready to go.

[@Crimson Raven] An interesting pair; reminds me of Dante and Vergil from Devil May Cry, if their roles were reversed. You left out their class features, however, and 'Uses Dark Magic' is a repetitive feature when he is already listed to use dark tomes. They may be default classes, so to speak, but they should still have unique class features (as explained in Character Creation). I can't stop stop you if you want to go without, but you'll be putting yourself at a slight disadvantage for it.

Another detail to note is your weapons- firstly, your greatsword image doesn't link properly (even though I managed to find the image you meant to link to). You might also want to list the base material of your weapons (bronze, iron, steel, etc) so that we can get a general idea of the weapon's quality, even if their make might suggest otherwise. And is that greatsword mysterious just by nature, or does it have some yet-to-be-revealed ability? If it's the latter, tell me about it; you can use PMs if you'd like to keep it secret. And in the meanwhile, I might also like to know where he got his hands on a Nosferatu tome, but if you can justify that I won't ask you to remove it.

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You guys are really hammering it out so far. Let us wait for a few more people to join (or Corporal Lance to return, whichever comes first) and we can get to work on the OOC for you all. Thank you for being patient.